Thursday, April 24, 2025

CHAT Writing 2 Class Notes--WK 13 (4/24)

 Hello There!

Today was another great day with this group.  They are such a blessing as we continue to work and learn together.


As usual, we started the day with a Quick Write–since we are working our way through poetry, they wrote a “color poem”--using a template to help them get started, they were prompted to use powerful imagery to write a poem about colors that evoke strong feelings.  I think the results were pretty amazing!


After that students had another opportunity to try their hands at writing some original poetry. We read George Ella Lyon’s autobiographical poem “Where I’m From”--and listened to the poet recite it.  They had some insightful observations!  Students had time in class to compose their own autobiographical poem in a style of their choice or based on the “Where I’m From” poem template.“I could tell some really got into “the zone” writing these and my hope is to hear some of these performed at our Poetry Event. 


Speaking of the Poetry Event, which will be the last day of class, we spent some time introducing this project.  It takes a lot of work to put on an event like this, and to split up the labor, each student will sign up for a role on a committee.  Their grade on this project will depend on not only their poetry performance techniques, but also how well they worked as a group. They are to consider which committee they want to join and as homework, they are to answer two Discussion Questions about their first and second preferences of which committee they’d like to participate in.  They should also begin to narrow down the poems they would like to perform.  They should post the names of two “found poems” and one original poem to the discussion question on Google Classroom.  The “found poems” can be from our poetry book, your own poetry collection, from the library or another source.  Each poem should be at least 4-5 lines and CHAT appropriate.  We will spend the bulk of next class period on committee work.


To conclude our Grammar for the year, I have a Mastering the Comma Test that they will take next week.  For this week, they have a review sheet that they should complete and then correct. (The Key is on the Google Classroom assignment.)  Correcting their own work will further help them review and will be much more beneficial than waiting a week to see if they got the answers right.  


Last, for Writing—now that students have turned in their FINAL formal essay for me (whoohoo!) they will submit a more informal Reflection Essay.  I passed out the guidelines for that assignment.  It is due the last day of class (May 8).


We have a couple fun weeks planned to finish out our year, so let's make sure you get caught up on any late work.


Assignments for Next Week:

Which Committee? Discussion Question

Which Poems?  Discussion Question

--Choose 3 poems for your contribution to the Poetry Jam (Here is the scoring/committee information)--Two found poems; one original poem

–Finish composing “Where I’m From” poem

About the Reflection essay

Reflection Essay (due May 8)

Complete the Mastering the Comma Review sheet and correct it. (Bring the corrected version to class)


Links for This Week

Color Poem

“Where I’m From” George Ella Lyon audio


Thursday, April 17, 2025

Writing 1 Class Notes–Week 12 (4/17)

 *Scroll down for the link to the essay contest!

Welcome back to CHAT!  I hope you had a wonderful break and are ready to finish the year STRONG!  The weather is really starting to turn Springy now!  


We started out with Visual Vocabulary.  Today’s words are:  fallacious and ardent.  Hopefully these students are never ardently fallacious!  I told them that we only have one more installment of Visual Vocabulary before the end-of-semester quiz.


We moved on to discuss the Writing portion of the class.  Today I checked in about the Comparison/Contrast essays that are due today.  This essay required some research, citations and Works Cited page. It also requires the most amount of Style elements for this year.  For some, this list of Style elements is a comfortable challenge and for some, it has been a tough stretch. 


If you are in the second category, I talked about how to reduce the checklist.  I demonstrated using the document camera how to choose just a few elements from both the Dress-Ups and Sentence Opener categories and how to indicate those chosen elements all the way through their essay.  If you are wondering which elements you should choose, I like to use the EZ + 1 strategy.  That is, choose the elements that feel easy for you, and then add one more.  


Be strategic about this!  Your checklist should not look sporadic! For example, if one of your chosen elements is an -ly adverb, then I should see that -ly adverb in each paragraph.  Please write “Reduced Checklist” on your Checklist if you decide to narrow it down.Unless you have indicated that on your checklist, I will expect all boxes to be checked–but DO WHAT YOU CHECK & CHECK WHAT YOU DO! 😀


In light of this new information, I extended the deadline.  It will be due next week (4/24). I recommend students use their time well and get in any compositions/essays that are still in the “In Process” category.


Last announcement:  As per my email, you may check Google Classroom for your current grade.  I have lost the battle with my grade book, so I won’t be sending any more reports this year.  I will send out final grades with some comments at the end of the semester.



For the Literature part of the class, we worked with a poem that is assigned for next week.  It’s actually one of my very favorites!  “The Red Wheelbarrow” by William Carlos Williams is short and packed with imagery.  After reading silently and aloud a few times (this did not take long!), we watched a short biographical video on his life.  Students then used a handout that helped them discuss the imagery and themes.  We discussed the other imagist poet Ezra Pound.  Students are assigned to write two poems in the style of Williams or Pound.


For Grammar we practiced Simple and Compound sentences again. Students had time to work on the two worksheets in class. Remember, just because you see a FANBOY, does not necessarily mean it’s a compound sentence.  You’ll know it’s compound if the sentence has two independent clauses.  Then put your comma before the FANBOY.


That is all!  Blessings on your weekend!

Mrs. G


Homework

Week 13 Poems

Poetry Response Packets

Imagist Poems–write 2

Week 12 Grammar 

–Simple & Compound Sentences

–Writing Compound Sentences 

Compare/Contrast Essay (if not yet finished or would like to reduce checklist)


Links for this week

Visual Vocabulary

WK 12 Poetry Discussion– “The Red Wheelbarrow”

*IEW Essay Contest


Thursday, April 3, 2025

CHAT Writing 1 Class Notes–Week 11 (4/3)

April is Poetry Month in Writing Class!  As an English teacher, it’s probably not surprising that I enjoy poetry.  But honestly, I haven’t really gotten into it until later in life.  If they are not already enjoying it, my goal is to open a door of poetry enjoyment for my students through reading some great poetry and attempting to write some lines of our own.


In that vein, our Quick Write was a poetic one.  I asked students to think of three questions–(serious, funny, or mundane) and to write them in a list.  We took a few minutes to arrange them into a poem while we listened to music.  I am looking forward to reading them!


Writing

Today, the KWO for the Compare/ContrastEssay was due.  Students who met their deadline received 20 points. Since two quotes and two sources are required for this composition, today we reviewed how to write both direct quotes and paraphrases for online sources.  We talked through how to cite sources both with and without an author.  After that, we reviewed how to put together a Works Cited page using some common generators.  They should be in good shape to write one for this essay.


The Literature portion of  class was dedicated to poetry. Some students enjoy poetry and some are not crazy about it.  We talked about how poetry is art made with words.  I told them that it is said that poets are born–but the rest of us can learn how to write verse and enjoy it.  :) 


After refreshing ourselves on last week’s poetry selections, we had a short discussion on themes and what stuck out to us.  It was interesting to hear their insights.  Their homework is to read the poems for next week and respond to two.  


After that, we had a very brief Grammar teaching on Simple and Compound sentences and students had time to work on the two worksheets in class.  We talked about the fact that when a FANBOY is connecting two independent clauses, it is called a compound sentence–and in that case, you must put a comma BEFORE the FANBOY.  If there is a FANBOY, but it is not connecting two independent clauses, it is a simple sentence and there is no comma necessary.


Blessings on your weekend!

Mrs. G


Homework for this week

Read Poetry:  



Links for this week

MLA In-Text Citation practice

Poetry Quick Write


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